文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者在句法层面做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
After finishing my exam, I feel so relaxed that there are a lot of things I want to do. In order to express all my emotions, I want to have a sleep to gain relaxation. Second,I would like to watch a football match at the stadium. I can also release myself through this way. Besides, I had better think of how I will get ready for my senior high school life.
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