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After finishing my exam, I feel quite relaxed that there are a lot of things I want to do. In order to express all my various feelings, how I wish I can have a sleep to have some relaxation. Second,I would like to watch a football match at the stadium. I can also release myself through this way. Besides, I had better think of how I will get ready for my senior high school life. I decide to do some prevision before entering school. Finally, I hope I will be well-prepared for my high school life to catch up with others and I believe I will overcome all the difficulties and hold on to look forward to the victory's arrival. Success belongs to persevering.
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