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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2050
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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Should parents send their kids to art classes? That is a quesion worthy of discussing. Different people have different oppinion. Some hold the idea that sending kids to art classes is good for the children. In their oppinion, art is important, and the more the children know the more possible they will be success, and art will be an advantage for them to win in the competetion. But there are some people else against the idea above. The reason why they disagree of sending kids to art classes is that they think it is too cruel to make the children do what they hate.They think that children should be happy, they have right to choose what they do and what they learn. In my oppinion, freedom is neccesary, of course. But it doesn't means kids should do everything leading by their wills. Nobody can be compelitily happy, that's because of the reasonality we must face. Children should learn hard for a better life in the future. Therefore, I think sending kids to art classes is good.

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