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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是单词拼写错误较多。
there are various places with wonderful seneries in china, such as, herited places, mountains, river, modern buildings. to introduce and develop chinese classic culture, i am more willing to recommand foriegn travellers to visit culture inheritege in china, such as, changcheng, gugong, bingmayong. china is a country which have a long history and colorful culture. the best place to which i want to take them is changcheng. as is known, changcheng is a unique place in the world, which has about ten thousand miles and a thousand-years history. it is builded by antient people with their sweat and blood. you can't imagine, at that time, that people can finishe such an amazing building without any advanced means or devices. to introduce changcheng is not only to show that chinese is diligent but to show chinese is intelligent,either.
