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作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。
There are various places with wonderful sceneries in china, such as, inherited places, mountains, rivers, modern buildings. To introduce and develop chinese classic culture, i am more willing to recomand foriegn travellers to visit culture inheritege in china, such as, the great wall, gugong, bingmayong. china is a country which have a long history and colorful culture. The best place to which i want to take them is changcheng. As is known, the great wall is a unique place in the world, which has about ten thousand miles and a thousand-years history. It is built by ancient people with their sweat and blood. You can't imagine, at that time, that people can finish such an amazing building without any advanced means or tools. To introduce changcheng is not only to show that chinese is diligent but to show chinese is intelligent,either.
