2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。

There are various places with wonderful scenery in china, such as, inherited places, mountains, rivers, modern buildings. To introduce and develop chinese classic culture, I am more willing to recomand foriegn travellers to visit culture heritage in china, such as, the great wall, gugong, bingmayong. china is a country which has a long history and colorful culture. The best place to which i want to take them is the great wall. As is known, the great wall is a unique place in the world, which has about ten thousand miles and a thousand-years history. It is built by ancient people with their sweat and blood. You can't imagine, at that time, that people can finish such an amazing building without any advanced means or tools. To introduce the great wall is not only to show that chinese is diligent but to show that chinese is intelligent,either.