2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

There are various places with wonderful scenery in china, such as, inherited places, mountains, rivers, modern buildings. To introduce and develop classic culture in china, I am more willing to recommend foreign travellers to visit culture heritage, such as, the great wall, gugong, bingmayong. China is a country which has a long history and colorful culture. The best place to which I want to take them is the great wall. As is known, the great wall is a unique place in the world, which has about ten thousand miles and a thousand-years history. It is built by ancient people with their sweat and blood. You can't imagine, at that time, that people can finish such an amazing building without any advanced means or tools. To introduce the great wall is not only to show that chinese is diligent but to show that chinese is intelligent,either.