2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(108):阳光体育活动

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

Yesterday I heard the Ministry of Education had asked us to develop a national student sports program. So excited was I that this news was learnt by me. Because I am so interested in the activity, which called us to exercise one hour a day to work healthily for fifty years, which can make us live happily. I hold my view for the reason that it can not only help us with hour body, but also be good for our mental health. As far as I am concerned the exercise is the based on the happy life in the future. So it is necessary for us. Especially for us students, who are having class in senior three, who is stuck in the stress. Last but not least, it is time we taken part in the activity, which won't make us say that" I could have kept in good health."