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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10533
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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作者词汇表达灵活丰富,希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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The kite as a specific thing symbolizes the integrity and kindness of Hassan. Hassan is the son of a servant, also as a servant and playmate for Amir. He has the good qualities of integrity and kindness, is loyal to Amir, without asking any return. He is vigorous, is the master of chasing kites in the city. In order to help Amir win the competition and the fatherly love, he goes all out for it. “For you,a thousand times over” ,he never forget to carry out his promise. For the shake of promise,to get the falling blue kite. Hasson chose to endure Assef's rape like a lamp finally because of his integrity when faced with the choice of promise or humiliation. He is honest that he thought the promise which he had made to Amir must be fulfilled no matter how arduous the task . After the humiliation, he didn’t blame Amir, and even purely hoped that Amir can treat him as the same as before, expected Amir to read the books, tell the stories for him. However, be opposite to Hassan, Amir accused that Hassan stealed his birthday present because of his unbearable guilt. In the face of the question of the owner, Hassan's answer was simple only one word: "Yes." Instead of Amir’s betrayal, the kind Hasson chose to use kindness to face his framing, chose to obey him and decided to leave the family and move back to the country with his father, Ali. After Amir and his father fled to the United States, Hassan and his wife volunteered to help Rachin Khan take care of the house. He put Amir's betrayal in the bottom of heart, got back to Kabul, where was full of war, to guard the owner's empty house. Everything he did was just for his master, for the kite he is chasing in his heart-----integrity and kindness. Eventually, for the guardian of the house, Hassan and his wife were both killed by the Taliban. Despite the ups and downs of Hassan, sufferred pain and darkness in the whole life. However, his existence is the proof of goodness and integrity, and stands for the desire of the author for good and true human nature and peaceful life of Afghtan.

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