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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3297
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

Recently learning Chinese is a popular in abroad. More and more people know the importance of using Chinese. So there is a question be suggest “whether or not Chinese can replace English to becoming the world’s language”. First, since the result of history, English has become a dominate global language. The British spread English all over the world, which by developed the colonies in the earliest 17th and 18th century, then occupied the leader position through the its industry. Subsequently, American’s economic advantage and political leader position insured that English is first or second language in most of countries. Although native Chinese people is the largest number in world, they almost live in China. Now as Chinese people is no colonist, there are no colonies which vast territory and speak Chinese; However, the early colonies of England, French and Spain still use these countries languages. Second, Chinese language is a very hard to learn and use for people in the other countries. Even you use Chinese pinyin to express Chinese characters, still there are four tones to distinguishing different meanings with each character. Also because dialect is very different around China, person who is from different region could not speak two dialects in Chinese. But in Europeans, this ability is more common, because the Latin is the major source of most Europe’s languages. Like an Englishman is easy to learn Spanish, but mostly northern Chinese people could not understand southern Chinese people’s dialect. Lastly, a west logistician said that there are three main factors to measure the strength of a language, population, ancient books and economic strength. Without the history, culture, geography and many other factors, why are the German and Japanese economic strength than the Spanish, but German and Japanese languages were not popularity to Spain. Obviously, Chinese language can not replace English to becoming the first language in the world today, but with the continuous improvement of Chinese economic and political status, Chinese language will more popular than other languages in the future.

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