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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文章词汇表达灵活恰当，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇；从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误。
in my opinion, students should be careful with their money in daily life since they are unable to make money on their own and it also helps them to form a good habit of using money wisely. the first reason is that students still live independently both in finacial and psychological. their money almost get from their parents.they don't have tha ability to make money. the second reason is that they are being students. what they should focus on is their study, and also including how to use money correctly. all in all, students should be careful with their money.
