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1999年专四作文真题:电视广告的优缺点

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:11浏览次数:7895
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Direction:We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so. What is your opinion? A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television
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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;高级词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;过程性词汇偏少。

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a major disvantage of advertising on television From my perspective, the disvantage of advertising on TV outweights the advantage .On the one hand, it shows the fault information with people; on the other hand, some of these advertisements may have some yellow and sensitive pictures related with some products. The advertisements on TV exaggerate the functions of the products to appeal people to purshase them.What's more, there are some pictures which have bad influences on childern.For example, when children watch TV , they can be exposed to some sensitive picture . To sum up, the disvantage of advertising on TV outweights the advantage.

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