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a major disvantage of advertising on television From my perspective, the disvantage of advertising on TV outweights the advantage .On the one hand, it shows the fault information with people; on the other hand, some of these advertisements may have some yellow and sensitive pictures related with some products. The advertisements on TV exaggerate the functions of the products to appeal people to purshase them.What's more, there are some pictures which have bad influences on childern.For example, when children watch TV , they can be exposed to some sensitive picture . To sum up, the disvantage of advertising on TV outweights the advantage.