作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a good friend. She name is Lili. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair,two bid eyes. Every day,I go to school with her. We are a class,and she is tall at our class.At school,she will help me with my stydy. She will play with me when go back home and after school. so,Lili was my best friend.