单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend, her name is Lili. she is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two bid eyes. Every day, I go to school with her. We are a class, and she is tall at our class.At school, she will help me with my study. She will play with me when we go back home and after school. so,Lili was my best friend.