小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I have a good friend, her name is Lili. she is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two bid eyes. Every day, I go to school with her. We are a class, and she is tall at our class. At school, she will help me with my study. She will play with me when we go back home and after school. Therefore, Lili was my best friend.