小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

I have a good friend, her name is Lili. As for me, Lili is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big eyes. Every day, I go to school with her. Lili is not only my friend but also my classmate. Obviously, she is tall at our class. At school, she will help me with my study. She will play with me when we go back home and after school. Therefore, Lili was my best friend.