采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
My best friends Books are always my best friends. they are always with me whatever I am and whenever I am they can make you laugh,cry and silence they can teach you something right they can open a world that you never meet even if books aren't real people,when I am reading ,I am talking with the writers