错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中衔接词丰富;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
visiting the beijing animal park in the weekend Last weekend, I got to beijing animal park with my firends. There were more visitor whose to feed the monkeys and to play with tiger. People get along well with animal, and they show friendly for each other. Therefore, we should be kind to animal. In addition, It's imporetent that protect the environment agnist pollution. What's more, people shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere. Last but not lease, I know that the importent of poretect animal. The relationship between people and animal more and more close is the reason why protect animal is protect human being.