错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中衔接词丰富;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少。
Visiting the beijing animal park in the weekend Last weekend, I got to beijing animal park with my friends. There was more visitor whose to feed the monkeys and to play with tiger. People get along well with animal, and they show friendly for each other. Therefore, we should be kind to animal. In addition, it's important that people protect the environment against pollution. What's more, people shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere. Last but not lease, I know that the important of poretect animal. The relationship between people and animal more and more close is the reason why protect animal is protect human being.