错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少;全文结构较为严谨。
Visiting the beijing animal park in the weekend Last weekend, I got to beijing animal park with my friends. There was more visitor whose to feed the monkeys and to play with tiger. People get along well with animal, and they show friendly for each other. Therefore, we should be kind to animal. In addition, it's importance that people protect the environment against pollution. Although some one do not know protect environment, we do know the importent of protect environment on. What's more, people shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere. Last but not lease, the important of poretect animal. The relationship between people and animal more and more close is the reason why protect animal is protect human being.