小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

There are many clock in the BROWNS,big one ,small one,new and old one.There is the old clock in the living room,the BROWNS like mostly it,because it already follows many years with the BROWNS and runs well now.Every day the BROWNS get up when the clock rings,and the clock are their friends.