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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that a lot of persons believe the appearance of a person is more important than the inner qualities of a person.These persons are attracted by one's appearance regardless of the inner qualities which are really important to evaluate a person.Although many persons have good appearance which is usually equipped wtih expensive clothes ,they still do many bad things result from lacking good qualities. Contrast to this opinion,i prefer to judge a person by their inner qualities,such as confidence,honest,kind, frank, generous and tolerant.All these good qualities can determine a person'future.Most of us are more willing to get along with persons with good qualities which make us feel comfotable. Personally,I'm fully convinced that what can judge a person is not the appearance but the inner qualities.

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