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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
where is the most beautiful cities,definitely YueYang. why am I said that?Please come to see it. I'd rather to be your guider. First, there are lots of delicious food, cheif would cook the fresh food for you before pick the mateical from the stream or local farm. Second,We can take the ferry around the dongtong lake and surfing should be exciting moment if you'd like to try it. Third,YueYang tower which is the most famous and long history beside the lake, it would be regarded romantic if you step up the top appreciating the lack scene and sunrise sunset with your lover. Fourth , the local people are extremely hospitable, the public security is very good,no one cheat you and steal you money at night. people like sharing the food and tell the lack's legend to you . In shot.welcome to my hometown.
