2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中衔接词丰富；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者能较多样的使用词汇表达，但要注意词汇拼写的检查。

The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the Chinse tratitional festival. It's on the 15th day in the 8th month of the lunar year which is in middle of autumn. On the day of the Mid-autumn festival, families spend some precious time together for whose all over the wrold. To the Chinse, who attach great importance to family togethers and the close relationship between family members, moocakes and the full moon are all the more meaningful. On that day, families are could enjoy the moon when eating mooncakes togethers. What's more, there is another acttivity, such as families visit relatives and friends to give tem blessings. Therefore, let us enjoying and admiring the full moon with families together.