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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;文中衔接词丰富;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。
The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the Chinse traditional festival. It's on the 15th day in the 8th month of the lunar year which is in middle of autumn. On the day of the mid-autumn festival, families spend some precious time together for whose all over the world. To the Chinse, who attach great importance to family together and the close relationship between family members, mooncakes and the full moon are all the more meaningful. On that day, families are could enjoy the moon when eating mooncakes togethers. What's more, there is another activity, such as families visit relatives and friends to give tem blessings. Therefore,the mid-autumn festival, it's a good day to enjoy and admire the full moon with families together.