小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl with long hair ang pretty eyes. She is very generous and kind. I can always ask her for help if I was in trouble. She is good in many aspects, such as painting, singing and dancing. She can cook, too. I really like her, so we often go out together. I enjoyed every moment I have spent with her.