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If let me act as a travelling guiding for a foreigner, I will take her to the Old east door in naning. It is a tourist attraction full of ancient artitecture and creative items for sale. When you step into the big stone gate of the attraction, you will see a big main street in the middle , it is arranged a lot of stores at the both sides of the street. Some shops sell interesting souvenirs recording old times , good ideas, special figures and so on. Some shops sell clothes representing national features different with clothes from normal fashion stores. There are also some theatres for comic dialogues and stand-up comedies. Besides these , there are book stores , traditional handmading stores and black and white moives and so on. No matter what kind of stores they are, they all communicating across the chinese traditional cultures. When you walk around in it, you will have many fresh experiences you ever tried in your country. I think my foreigner friend not only enjoy the travelling time but also further know the chinese culture. It's a satisfied trip in my point of view.
