河南郸城光明中学2012-2013学年八年级上学期期中试卷作文试题

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I like English best.It can bring me enjoyment and success. when I was six years old,I remember sitting close to the radio, listening to my favourite English stories and to the voice of my favourite presenters ,it seemed that they were speaking to me in person .After that,I have found I like English . when I was ten years ,I have a dream ,It's America dream ,I hope to see the whole of American.As I grow old,my interested in English grow . While I am speaking English, I will feel happy and exciting.