小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中从句的数量太少。

My name is JIM. There is a photo of my family's on the desk. Do you see me? oh, this is me who sit down in the middle of two old peoples. This two old peoples are my grandparents and they love me very much.This beautiful woman is my mum ,and she is a nurse.My father stands behind me and he is very high and he work in the school. My family all have friendly, and I am happy with their.