小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

从句使用不熟练，注意在平时练习中多加积累；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累。

My name is JIM. There is a photo of my family's on the desk. Do you see me? This is me who sit between two old men. The two old men are my grandparents and they love me very much.This beautiful woman is my mum,and she is a nurse. My father stands behind me and he is very tall and he work in the school. My family are all kind, and I am happy with them.