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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3297
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇。

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Secondly, the character of each person has been forming in their childhood. There are so many diverse between cultural background, economic strength, social tendency and the number of family children and sex ratio and so on in each family, which factions constitute the various of a person’s personality. As an example in the values, the rich boy may like by taxi to saving time; however, the needy boy may be like on foot instead of saving money. The problem is that they may be good friends in the initial period of time, after that they may feel uncomfortable with each other.

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