小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

My good friend is LiLi.She is so shy and lovely.She has blue eyes,blone hairs.She likes to music with me.She can help me something that I don’t solve problem.She is very tall and thin.We like swimming in summer.She was born and Raised by her granny in Dahuang viliage Shizhen township Wannian county Jiangxi province.