错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
As the saying goes the tailor makes the man. Absolutely right? Of course not. Everything has two aspects, a person wore a beatiful cloth, it can be right, because it led to increase self-confidence and gave others a good impression on ourselves. Recent news reports some that many commodities have been over-packaged. Why is this case?It deserved to ponder. There are my opinions, on the one hand, the merchant want to save much money from comsumers. On the other hand, the customer want to buy the fine products and send it to others who will not look down on thenselves. In the face of such excessive packaging,we should say no.because it is a waste of resources.After all, truth is better than false.