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Nowadays,people has been accustomed to talk with others by computer in order to they could be easy to get messages and information.The Internet is convenient to us study and communication. Meanwhile,it also has brought troubles in life's interpersonal communication.Only we distinguish good or bad information and grasp the essence of communication,can we enjoy life from complicated interpersonal communication. Different people have different awareness,there are two views about whether people should spend much more time contacting with other in Internet.On the one hand,some people think that Internet has been a essential part of life since computer is invented.Sometimes we can find out many problems change more complex owing to the deficiency of Internet in life.A person not only fast accepts messages that he wants to,but also he can efficiently screen useful message from a variety of information with computer.What'more,people can make more friends who come from everywhere around the world by computer.On the other hand,the other disagrees the above dispute.they don't think that people truth with each other lack of the face to face communication.As long as a person learn how to identify good or bad people,he can freedom to talk with other people. In my opinion,we can not deny Internrt is convenience to our life.We should foster a capacity about how to distinguish good or bad messages.we will have many friends if we learn the means of making friends by computer.
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