2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,we can observe distinctly that a change has taken place in students'participation in part-time jobs at a certain college.According to the figures which is provided,the percentage of students who take part-time jobs is only slightly different in the groups of freshmen,sophomores and juniors,while in students'final year of college,there appears a sharp rise. Apparently,among freshmen,the participation percentage of part-time jobs is approximately 67.77%.Meanwhile,for sophomores,there is an insignificant rise,which is around 71.13% and the percentage of juniors is roughly 71.93%,a slight rise as well nevertheless,the percentage indicates a significant change in senior students in that it dramatically grows to 88.24%. Some possible factors may contribute to this phenomenon.The obvious factor is that students of grade four have much more time for taking a part-time job when they have finished their assignments.But another important factor that cannot be ignored is that as the graduation date is around the corner,students realize that they need to gain more working experience,which undoubtedly would improve their competitiveness and may facilitate them to obtain a better job.Taking a look from a different angle,we may also correspondingly conclude that the job market is becoming more and more intensified.Only those who are ready for the challenges could find a way to accomplish their goals.