词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend. His name is Jet Li. We know each other many years ago. We are classmate of high school. we go to school together,and we also go home together. and then we went to the same college until we graduated from school. He became a teacher in a school. And I get a job of IT engineer.