2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

First I want to learn how to swim . I think swimming is so good for our health. It can make me slim ,and it can make me illness . When I can swim , I may help the people who can't swim . Second I will go to Guangxi Province to see my parents . They do business over there . I can stay with them and help them do some cook . Becise these , I will read more and more books as I can . You know what ever we read , we can learn a lot from the book. And , after I read , I will also listen to some msusic , beacuse t it can make me comfortable . Ok so much for my plant .