语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;可适当增加高级词汇的使用量。
When somebody asks for help, in which situation we would say no? In my opinion, First is we have not enable to help. Second is we are so busy that we don't have time to help others. The last is we are not want to heip because our brain told us not to do that. There must have some question about why some people in we should say not and they don't do that. In my thought, this is belongs our Chinese people, because we are like to be like not be say unlike. But it have some problem when we say yes but we should say not , then we may have some problem. First is we can't do that the people want your to do. Second, we can do that but we need to pay many money even we broke up our family. Thirst, it would broken our friendship or team. So, when someone ask for help, you need to think is can i do that? And, don't afraid somebody would angry with you, they can't do that too, if they have thought.