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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1890
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分52.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少。

用户练习作文:

When somebody asks for help, in which situation we would say no? In my opinion. First is we aren't enably to help. Second is we are so busy that we don't have time to help others. The last is we are not want to heip because our brain told us not to do that. There must have some question about why some people in we should say not and they don't do that. In my thought, this is belongs our Chinese people, because we are like to be like not be say unlike. But it have some problem when we say yes but we should say not , then we may have some problem. First is we can't do that the people want your to do. Second, we can do that but we need to pay many money even we broke up our family. Thirst, it would broken our friendship or team. So, when someone ask for help, you need to think is can i do that? And, don't afraid somebody would angry with you, they can't do that too, if they have thought.

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