语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;可适当增加几条从句。
When somebody asks for help, in which situation we would say no? First is we aren't able to help. Second, we are so busy that we don't have time to help others. The last is we are not want to help because our brains told us not to do that. There must have some question about why some people in we should say not and they don't do that. In my thought, this belongs our Chinese people, because we are like to be like not be say unlike. But it has some problems when we say yes but we should say not , then we may have some problem. First is we can't do that the people want your to do. Second, we can do that but we need to pay much money even we broke up our family. Third, it can broken our friendship or team. So, when someone asks for help, you need to think is that can I do that? And, don't worry somebody would angry with you, they can't do that too, if they have thought.