语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
Dear John thanks your invite,and i am so sorry,next monday i have a exam,i must do it,you know exam is so interesting,i can not result them,if is you,i think maybe you will do it ,all the time do exam,because study make me happy school is so good i love study i love school ,so i do not accept your invite ,so have a good time guys.and bless me have a good point . Yours LiHua