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Dear John thanks your invite, and I am so sorry, next monday I have an exam, I must do it,you know exam is so interesting, I can not result them, if is you, I think maybe you will do it, all the time do exam,because study make me happy school is so good I love study I love school, so I do not accept your invite, so have a good time guys. And bless me have a good point. Your friend LiHua.