单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文中从句过少;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear John thanks your invite, and I am so sorry. next monday I have an exam, I must do it. you know exam is so interesting, I can not refuse them. if is you, I think maybe you will do it. all the time think do exams,because study make me happy, school is so good. I love study I love school. so I do not accept your invite, have a good time guys. And bless me have a good point. Your friend LiHua.