作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;文中从句过少;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。
Dear John: Thanks your invite, and I am so sorry. Because next monday I have an exam, I must do it. You know exam is so interesting, I can not decline them. If is you, I think maybe you will do it. All the time do the exams,because learning makes me happy,and school is so good. I love study I love school. So I do not accept your invite, have a good time guys. And pray me have a good point. Please allow me to say sorry again. Your friend,LiHua.