正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
Dear John, Thanks your invite, and I am so sorry. First next monday I have an exam, I must do it. You know exam is so interesting, I can not decline them. If is you, I think maybe you will do it. Because learning makes me happy,and school is so good. I love study I love school. So I do not accept your invite, have a good time guys. And pray me have a good point. I do long for a pleasant chat with you. Please allow me to say sorry again. Your friend,LiHua