文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;从句使用不熟练,注意在平时练习中多加积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
Dear John, Thanks your invite, and I am so sorry.Unfortunately, next monday I have an exam, I must do it. You know exam is so interesting,and I can not decline them. If you is me, I think you will do that,Because learning makes me happy,and school is so good. I love study I love school. So I do not accept your invite, have a good time guys. And pray me have a good point. Please allow me to say sorry again.I really, really thank you very much for your invitation to me. Your friend,LiHua