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Dear John, Thanks your invite, and I am so sorry.Unfortunately, next monday I have an exam, I must do it. You know exam is so interesting,and I can not decline them. If you is me, I think you will do that,Because learning makes me happy,and school is so good. I love study I love school. So I do not accept your invite, have a good time guys. And pray me have a good point. Please allow me to say sorry again.I really, really thank you very much for your invitation to me. But I also really, really very love learning, he is like my friend with me, so I love him, and love you, too. Forgive me, my friend, another day invite you to dinner. Your friend,LiHua