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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,但请注意单词拼写的检查;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。

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human relationshiop in our society In today society that human relationships have very chage. Such as. There is a credidility gapdeveloping between people. Besides, people not mutual understanding and accept the differences of others. People have no respect, no regard for anyone is feelings. What ismore,people have no feeling for the suffering of others. The negative results such problems may bring about to our sciety. First, you can see such a society that is morally bankrupt and politically unstable. Secondly, decling social well-being. Last,people relationship chage tension. I as a student, in order to establish a harmonious society. First, I need studying attentivecyand enhancement of ability. Socondiy, choose one of the hardest jobs yourself to set an example.In addition, Listen to other people when they talk to you. Besides, I need has sympathy. Last, accept the differences of others and alwary thyy to help others

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