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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Currently . Even though many argue that advertisements impose the level of similarity of human beings , I believe that people still keep their own different personalities .oftentimes , the ad of iphone is on the tv . of course I prefer iphone . nevertheless , my parents would still like to use Samsung’s smartphones. There are lots of different goods advertised for your appreciation . you face with plenty of choice and don’t need to be the same as others .the possibility is at a low rate .for example , coca cola is famous for everyone. However , you can also pick up pepsi cola instead. The development of modern market improve the jump of the number of diverse brands. Admittedly ,with the spread of national education , it’ll be harder that people are deceived or controlled to purchase one thing . everybody gets his mind of buying which one or not . despite the advantages of toothpaste advertised on tv , more housewifes prefer the brand they think high qualities and cheap. To sum up , in spite of the advertisement information sometimes messed up , it let us be aware of hundreds of thousands of productions that we can choose .it may help us find the right thing you really need in modern life.
