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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11034
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。

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Spending too much time online Nowadays, internet has become more and more popular. It changes people's life, and more and more people rely heavily on the internet. Even they try to ignore life, they think to play on line is more important than anything. Someone thinks it could replace anything. Internet enhances people's quality of life. In the school, many students like to study online. Because the knowledge of books is limited. In recent years, most people chose to shop online. They think it saves money, and they can buy anything conveniently. However, as every coin has two sides, internet also creates troubles for us. First, Network security release is the issue that people are concerned about, and increase people's sense of loneliness. Second, internet affects people's health. Spending too much time online will lead to poor eyesight, losing themselves in playing computer games. Therefore, we should keep a balance between life and internet. The internet is very important for us, but it can't replace our life.

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